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FREE SPIRIT
FREE SPIRIT
Tonight you sleep,
Body under the sheet,
While you dream,
Feeling a sence of peace,
Looking down on me,
Floating above the tree's
Drifting to the star stream's
Sight that must be seen,
Heaven I've been,
Don't want to leave,
Though heaven not ready for me,
Body relieved,
Spirit has been retrieved,
Time to be,
The man that can be,
To become the real me,
Set your spirit free.
Colin Bradley.
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