Your Poetry Dot Com

thank you for the compliment on from whom i feed i hope you enjoy my others also

2002-10-30 08:30

1468

lost_word

it really didnt have anything to do with anything but whenever something comes 2 mind i write it down because it may be helpful for me in the future...but it can be about anything u want it 2 be.. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-10-30 09:57

1469

Bitterkel

thank you for the comment on new kind, i hope you enjoy my others as well <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-10-31 07:45

1470

norticus

thanks for the post on new kind, hope you enjoy my others also

2002-10-31 07:47

1471

norticus

all in good time i will finish , thank you for the comment on your seed, liked it huh? i\'m glad, did you see what the poem was really about?? (hint..starts with a B)

2002-10-31 07:50

1472

THank you I am glad you liked it. I wrote it as a symbol for the hard work my husband does in the Army and nobody ever Thanks him but me. I think there are more soldiers that need thanked and by more than just me. Laura <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-10-31 08:11

1473

Yes, you can show it to your street kids, enjoy, from nathan <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_lol.gif">

2002-10-31 12:52

1474

<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> Thank you Oreo for the comment you left for my son, he said he\'ll write more but to let you know it\'s very hard to think of good words, he\'s a beautiful child,

2002-10-31 13:08

1475

stephy

Thanks Stephy, for the comment,

2002-10-31 13:11

1476

Sage

thanks Sage for the comment, at first he was afraid to put it here, for everyone to see, we made it through another obstacle today,

2002-10-31 13:14

1477

Poetic_Angel

thanks Poetic Angel for the wonderful comment,

2002-10-31 13:16

1478

lil_Jewel

Lil_Jewel, Thanks for your comments. However I read in your bio; that nobody really cares. That you don\'t care. Wrong!! You care, it came through loud and clear to me. Someone has hurt you pretty bad and I am so sorry for that. Please allow you out. I already feel the wonderful young person you are. Warm Regards, Dallas Fwog and I Care Catch Ya!

2002-10-31 14:11

1479

Thanks for commenting on my sons poem, he truly is my life\'s gift, he wrote his own reply back to you last night, I had to explain to him what street kids are, he\'s so innocent of this life, thanks again, val

2002-10-31 22:35

1480

thanks Chrissy, he was surprised so many people read it, we\'ve concurred another obstacle, (his fear of not being excepted, <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_wink.gif"> val

2002-10-31 22:39

1481

rockshv

norticus

hahahhah thanx for the feedback!! ;O)

2002-11-01 03:10

1482

Ramfire

Hi OreO, I\'m glad you liked my poem, Brave Knight. I\'ve always admired English knights, best in the world!. Such a great country. Regards, Ramfire

2002-11-01 04:28

1483

SeXyDrAgOn

you live in sask? what part? aernby

2002-11-01 06:48

1484

twins

message me back, from sister <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-11-01 13:44

1485

twins

message me back

2002-11-01 13:57

1486

Dear christina; Thanks for your post. I do agree with you. Our lives have been abundantly blessed by God. He\'s couragious and good. Send more feedback. Thanks So Much. Maria <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-11-01 21:30

1487

I love your poetry. There\'s such truth, such imaginative work. Maria

2002-11-01 21:39

1488

<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif"> just a short note to let you know how much you inspired my son Nathan, he LOVES being called a soldier, <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> You inspired him so much that his goal now is to write 30 poems, so you can use more for your street kids, he prayed for them last night, thanks so much for what you did for him, you have touched him deeply

2002-11-01 22:15

1489

DreamWeaver

thanks DreamWeaver, for the comment, I will try to write more, from nathan

2002-11-02 00:03

1490

rbp861

thanks <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif">

2002-11-02 18:43

1491

SA_RA

the harfest thing about living in soutern canada after 20 years north of the 51st is the non-winters that we get down here. i miss he snow, i miss the cold, sun dogs, northern lights ..... aw, well, thanks for the comment

2002-11-02 21:24

1492

SA_RA

think i quiet understand you; you know i live for a brief time (two months – but for me, seems like ages) in Western Germany and there are no mountains, no green walleys, woods; even the sky is grey there, instead blue…and most of i missed there was friendly people …ok…but i survive..<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_wink.gif">…hope you too, or if you could back just for a visit ..(better than nothing). I wish you the very best!

2002-11-03 02:57

1493

MisterRight

i thought you would like it, wait and see what else i can do.......

2002-11-03 08:49

1494

[quote] On 2002-11-01 22:15, Valerie Pearson wrote: <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif\"> just a short note to let you know how much you inspired my son Nathan, he LOVES being called a soldier, <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif\"> You inspired him so much that his goal now is to write 30 poems, so you can use more for your street kids, he prayed for them last night, thanks so much for what you did for him, you have touched him deeply [/quote][EMAIL]null[/EMAIL][B]null[/B][LIST]

2002-11-03 20:18

1495

Budgurl162

crucifixioncross

Thanx, hey i have a dumb question for you, how long does it take until the poem u submite is posted? <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_confused.gif">, i feel like such an ass asking that! oh well, i would really appreciate it, if u could help me out.

2002-11-04 11:51

1496

Budgurl162

Hollie85

I look forward to reading some of it. I posted a couple of mine like 5 hours ago, and they still havent been posted, this sites kinda slow. what kind of poetry do you write?

2002-11-04 13:57

1497

:-P Jenni Thank you for your comments on my site,I took the guest book out because I kept getting slander comments on there! I cant imagine who would do that,I\'m just a mom trying to make extrea cash I didnt want anything real fancy you know! Any how I just wanted to thank you Your comment will satay on there & others but I\'m removing the bad ones & freezing it so I wnot get any more I dont know what else to do! It was appreciated! Christina[EMAIL]lowman613@aol.com[/EMAIL]

2002-11-04 23:26

1498

I am glad you enjoy my poetry

2002-11-05 09:32

1499

chaseman

Thank you so much for reading and commenting on my poems it means alot to me. I would much like to read your poems also and I will. I am a bit new to this website and maybe you could show me around. and hay maybe get to be nice friends. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-11-06 09:17

1500

chaseman

POOBEAR

Thank you alot. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif"> I am happy you love them. Hay maybe I will get a band and put it to music <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_lol.gif"> that would be aswome <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_lol.gif">

2002-11-06 09:21

1501

chaseman

Thanks man. I really enjoy your comments. I think they ar wonderful and am happy that someone listens to my poems. I would like to read any you have also.

2002-11-06 09:26

1502

Hollie85

<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> Thanks for posting a comment about my poem \"Blood and Roses\" Please share with me how you felt about it. Thanks. Maria aka S/Angel <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_lol.gif"> <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_wink.gif">

2002-11-06 09:57

1503

Jenni whats the title of this poem youre talking about I want to read it! About your 8 yr. old nephew! Christina <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif">

2002-11-06 11:48

1504

Thanks for reaing my poem, On Eden\'s March. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-11-07 03:47

1505

Ericc

<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cool.gif"> Thanks for reading my poem, Perhaps.

2002-11-07 03:52

1506

Lia

Thanks for reading my poem, Perhaps. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-11-07 03:53

1507

Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem, On Eden\'s March. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif">

2002-11-07 15:20

1508

SunshineBees

PlayItForward

Thanks for the honest opinion. Wl work on it. Sun

2002-11-08 04:29

1509

SunshineBees

shepdog1972

Thanks for the comment!.. Hey guess what? I am married now.. After that incident, i found love again.. and now its gonna be one year in December 29,2002. My 1st Wedding Anniversary. Good luck to u..Take care Masrina Bee <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-11-08 04:33

1510

SunshineBees

Thanks for reading my poems and commenting on it. I really appreciate it. U take care now. Much Love Masrina Bee <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-11-08 04:47

1511

nay

i see you\'ve commented on both of the poems i have on this site. thanks <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> [I]null[/I]

2002-11-08 05:30

1512

[quote] On 2002-11-01 21:39, SapphireAngel wrote: I love your poetry. There\'s such truth, such imaginative work. Maria [/quote] Geez..I just saw this message..along with some others.. please don\'t think I was being rude by not answering..Thank you very much for your kind comment.... I enjoy yours also. Jenni

2002-11-08 07:02

1513

Chicken

[quote] On 2002-09-22 08:22, Chicken wrote: Thanks for the note...the girl\'s user name is \"ginsdance\" if you want to go check her stuff out....w/b soon [/quote] Geez..I just saw this message..along with some others.. please don\'t think I was being rude by not answering.. I dont even recall what this was about..sorry.. but I have been reading Gin\'s work and enjoy them very much... Jenni

2002-11-08 07:04

1516

Suzy

[quote] On 2002-10-20 17:53, Suzy wrote: Jenni just wanted to thank you for the warm comments. They are much appreciated and needed right now. It seems like I start to get a grasp of things and then something happens to send them haywire again. By the by hope things are well with you. Once again thank you. Lasca [/quote] Geez..I just saw this message..along with some others.. please don\'t think I was being rude by not answering... You\'re welcome!! ANYTIME.. Jenni

2002-11-08 07:11

1517

AnnD

[quote] On 2002-09-25 03:12, AnnD wrote: Hiya Jenni, Thankyou so much for yur lovely comment on my poem....he he.......i\'m not saying tht some fella pi***ed me off or anything.....but this was the result.LOL Its good to hear from you.Hope you and yours are well....Take good care of yourself. Ann [/quote] Geez..I just saw this message today....along with some others.. please don\'t think I was being rude by not answering...All is fine here thanks.. Jenni

2002-11-08 07:12

1518

[quote] On 2002-11-04 23:26, LOWMAN613 wrote: <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif"> Jenni Thank you for your comments on my site,I took the guest book out because I kept getting slander comments on there! I cant imagine who would do that,I\'m just a mom trying to make extrea cash I didnt want anything real fancy you know! Any how I just wanted to thank you Your comment will satay on there & others but I\'m removing the bad ones & freezing it so I wnot get any more I dont know what else to do! It was appreciated! Christina[EMAIL]lowman613@aol.com[/EMAIL] [/quote] Geez..I just saw this message today.. ..along with some others.. please don\'t think I was being rude by not answering..Thank you very much for your kind comments.... I enjoy your work very much. I will message you again soon.. I have a few more msgs to reply too... Take care.. Jenni

2002-11-08 09:10

1519

[quote] On 2002-11-06 11:48, LOWMAN613 wrote: Jenni whats the title of this poem youre talking about I want to read it! About your 8 yr. old nephew! Christina <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif\"> [/quote] Hi again..I;\'m sorry about this..can\'t believe I dont know how to navigate this site as yet..lol....It\'s called \'Through the years\" but I\'m not so sure it\'s posted here... on new site.. If it isn\'t I will post it as soon as I am done with the 4 parts of Forbidden love... Jenni

2002-11-08 09:12

1520

thank you for your comments on my haiku -- Haiku responds to contemplation more so than analysis In this case i was relating each of the three things in the first to lines, to the third. \"ice out\" is a northern phenominon when the ice suddenly leaves the lake -- proof positive of spring ... thanx again aernby +

2002-11-08 20:42

1521

I will add more but it will be a little while I have posted all I have for now but I do plan to write more. THank you so much for your lovely comments Laura <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cool.gif">

2002-11-09 03:22

1522

Thank you for reading my poem, December\'s scard <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cool.gif">

2002-11-09 06:10

1523

Thank you for reading my poem, December\'s scard <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-11-09 06:11

1524

Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem, December\'s scarf <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_wink.gif">

2002-11-09 06:12

1525

WordPoet

[quote] On 2002-11-08 07:07, Jenni Kalicharan wrote: [quote] On 2002-09-17 07:05, WordPoet wrote: Thanks for the comment....So far you\'re the only one. I noticed that you had a book out: \"Beneath The Surface\" By Jenni Kalicharan & Nicole Rahaman How did it go? The thought of publishing flirted across my mind but I\'m not sure if it\'s worth the trouble or not. Anyway, again thanks for the comment. They\'re always appreciated. <g> [/quote] Geez..I just saw this message today..along with some others.. please don\'t think I was being rude by not answering..Thank you very much for your kind comment.... I\'ll message you later with the answers to your questions.... I have to reply to a few other messages I just saw... <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif\"> Jenni [/quote] Not a problem... I stumbled across this private message area a little late in the game too and had people waiting for me. No rush, whenever you get a chance to answer is fine. I\'ll check in from time to time. L8r, Doug <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cool.gif">

2002-11-09 16:08

1526

cryingonmyporch

Knowledge

Hey I\'m not really mad at you and it is okay! It\'s just thats the way I was thinking! I do hope we can still be friends always Amy

2002-11-10 07:21

1527

cryingonmyporch

Knowledge

Hey I\'m not really mad at you and it is okay! It\'s just thats the way I was thinking! I do hope we can still be friends always Amy <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_frown.gif"> besides I was sad without you!

2002-11-10 07:21

1528

MoonlitAngel

Vampy

[quote] On 2002-10-10 06:48, Vampy wrote: Thank you for giving me some feedback, I appreciate it... <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_eek.gif\">) [/quote] Feedback on what...? I\'m lost, lol ~ MoonlitAngel

2002-11-10 20:39

1529

thank you for the comment on insane, hope you like my others as well

2002-11-10 22:32

1530

THank you I am glad you enjoyed it. I have several posted please feel free to keep commenting I love the critisism. Laura <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-11-11 06:33

1531

Christina, just wanted to tell you a little story that is a huge part of my life, when I was seventeen I was very ill, started having blackout\'s almost 5 times a day, I was soon hospitalized, and the doctor did alot of testing on me, I had to undergo surgery, 9 times to be exact, I told my doctor how scared I was, and that I didn\'t want to die, she said I\'d be fine, but, they lost me in the operating room, I went through a tunnel which flashed my life to me, soon I was in a room that was pure white, and a beautiful angel appeared, she talked to me, I could see the doctors and nurses trying their hardest to revive me, I asked her if I had died, and she told me the Lord was not ready for me at that time, I will never forget this as long as I live, I wrote a couple of poems about it, they are on the old site, but I will repost them, I do want to let you know when I entered it was beautiful, all my pain was gone, people tell me they feel her when they touch me, a gift God has given, I shared this with you for you to find peace in the death of your mother, there is indeed an afterlife, but enjoy life as it is today, smile through all wether the road is rough or not, its a beautiful thing to be alive, may God bless you, (P.S. I also collect angels, I have over 200 of them, one even looks like the one I saw,) lots of love to you,

2002-11-11 09:23

1532

Ronald

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your kind comments. Dot <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif">

2002-11-13 03:32

1533

Thanks for reading my poem. I hope you have good memories of home, too. Dot <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_wink.gif">

2002-11-13 03:33

1534

Thank you for reading my poem. I am pleased that it took you back to the good old days of home. We all need to reach back now and then to remember our dear loved ones. Dot <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_wink.gif">

2002-11-13 03:36

1535

WordPoet

Yes. The rest is a very long story. In short, I\'ve loved this woman for over 15 years, long before I ever knew my wife. Nothing has ever happened between us but my feelings for her have always been there. This is my way of expressing them. She knows how I feel and I know how she feels. We both agree that my marriage comes first. It is similar to these ancient greek tragedies where true love is denied by the Gods. Who knows what fate will have in store but for now words are all I have. I don\'t know if this answers your question or not so if your still curious feel free to ask.

2002-11-13 07:55

1536

Unaekseveer1

thank you for the comment on a part of ma and a part of you, hope you enjoy my others as well, might I suggest one called mermaid

2002-11-13 08:20

1537

[quote] On 2002-11-08 07:09, Jenni Kalicharan wrote: [quote] On 2002-10-28 07:28, princesspurty wrote: thank you for the comment on cowboy, it does sound like a song huh? maybe one day my cowboy will sing it for me [/quote] Geez..I just saw this message..along with some others.. please don\'t think I was being rude by not answering...... I enjoy your poems very much. Jenni [/quote] hey, thats ok, im glad you like them got new ones up, post me a comment sometime , thanks

2002-11-13 08:22

1538

thank you for the comment on a part of me and a part of you, it will make you wonder who might love you, love is great like that at times <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-11-13 08:28

1539

Thank you so much. Grandchildren are truly special little people sent to us to love. Dot <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_wink.gif">

2002-11-14 00:21

1541

DreamWeaver

thank you for the comment on what I feel, hope you enjoy my others also

2002-11-14 09:33

1542

DreamWeaver

Thanks, DreamWeaver for caring so much, for some reason, its hard to explain why God choose me to go through this, I\'ve had two cousins murdered, the one was due to a halloween prank by five teens, they hung a dummy on an overpass, and she was headed home at about 2:00am, to her it looked like a man walking in the middle of the road, she swerved to miss it and lost control of the car, she was only 25 yrs old, the five were caught and are now serving time, the sad thing is they watched it happen and ran, I still haven\'t come to find the right words yet to commemorate her, Her name was Teresa, my other cousin was Lisa, age 34, jealous boyfriend that she had broke up with returned when he found out she was going to marry someone else, he killed her one day before she was to marry, she left behind two wonderful children, and then those deaths, too many, at one time, the week before they died, my son with autism was hospitalized from feb.23 to the 28th with what they called a foreign flu, the doctors didn\'t think he was going to make it, they were going to fly him out by helicopter to a special hospital, I had a priest come in to say a prayer over him, and God healed him, (a miracle, I believe took place that day) But I know God knew what his plans were the next two days, I wrote a poem called \"Kiss of Peace\" you may want to read tommorrow, I submitted it tonight takes so long to get it on site though, thanks for being an ear for me tonight, and Be strong\" Nathan said he gave you some strongness too!

2002-11-14 12:42

1543

How do I go on? sometimes I don\'t know, thanks for caring so much, besides she\'s probably keeping your mom very busy up in heaven, grant we all have angels, another thing I am very spiritually connected with God, He has blessed me much in life, even through all this pain, read my poem tomorrow, \" A Kiss of Peace\" came to me tonight, also I like you to watch a show called Crossing Over with John Edwards, he\'s a christian, and I believe he may be of some help to you as you grieve for your mother, It\'s on the scifi channel (40) here in Michigan, it on at 11:00pm

2002-11-14 13:06

1544

tweaks2004

aubz_09

Hey whats up? Srry i havent been online lately.....ive been in trouble cause i got some bad grades. So u got a cam yet??? i hope u do or get one soon....well have some fun. When u get on email me so we can meet up <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_lol.gif">

2002-11-15 08:45

1545

Fwog, Share this with your street kids, it may help them SEE, if you get a chance, read my other poems I just recently added, you\'ll see much of how this came about, \"A bleeding tear\" you\'ll understand why <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif">

2002-11-15 13:04

1546

ml02

i just want to let you know, i\'m really not like this. i do play games and hate inmature girls, but i\'d never in real life wish death on anyone, not even an ex or whatever. its just something that kinda formulated in my head and i thought it was interesting. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cool.gif"> <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif"> <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cool.gif"> <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif"> <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cool.gif"> <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif">

2002-11-15 13:40

1547

ml02

2002-11-15 13:41

1548

WordPoet

2002-11-15 13:52

1549

I tried to use those smiles in a aol email they didnt work ! I can only use them in here? Or could Iuse them else wher? Thanks! <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_confused.gif">

2002-11-16 00:15

1550

I will... Jenni

2002-11-16 04:56

1551

Chester_England_White

Jackee_line

<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> Thanks again not sure if I sent this ok or not ! Blessing to you Chet

2002-11-16 14:26

1552

PhantomsLDY

emystar

just in case you haven\'t checked \"The Phantom is a happily married man and alot of his poetry comes from past experiences it does not necessarily mean he\'s looking. I would appreciate it if you would make your remarks just a little more platonic since i also write so there for I check this site myself. I am very happy you enjoy his poetry as do I and many others but please don\'t try to make it personal as your feelings will get hurt if you don\'t believe me you can send him a message and ask him yourself Sincerely, PhantomsLDY

2002-11-17 05:38

1553

Tyes

poetry.com has been one of my gratest sadness. i entered for the amature poetry competition,where by my poem was choosen as one of the finalist .i even received various letters from them askingfor my permission for the publication of my poem and also for the recording as one of the 30 people choosen. they even promised to send me an invitation letter to attend a poetry seminar in the united states . this they failed to fulfilled. since then have been trying to send in another poem but it seems nigeria has being ommited from the participating country. thanks for the information. (they are cheat]

2002-11-18 01:27

1554

Tyes

2002-11-18 01:28

1555

thanks for checking the poems out, hope you enjoy my next ones always, princesspurty <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-11-19 09:09

1556

I will appreciate if you can be commenting on my poem. You are really great, I do envy you. bye4 for now.

2002-11-20 00:55

1557

I surely would appreciate if u can be commenting on my poem. Have read through some of ur works ,u are really great. I do envy u. For me am a new poet. I do need ur support

2002-11-20 01:01

1558

Nessiecat

LOL It is weird isn\'t it? And by the way, my poem isn\'t better than yours! You\'re you own worst enemy <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif"> Big yourself up babes XXXX

2002-11-20 07:28

1559

hey! check out my new one mermaid part 2, I\'m proud of this one so much, thank you

2002-11-20 09:56

1560

Unaekseveer1

I agree with you there are a lot of guestions being asked about Americans, Canadians,Etc Some of these things are opinons but its best to keep things left alone! <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif">

2002-11-21 12:15

1561

thanks for the comment on my prison cell, i\'m proud of it for that man makes me feel that way

2002-11-24 07:34

1562

thanks for the comment on my prison cell, i\'m proud of it for that man makes me feel that way

2002-11-24 07:35

1563