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Dance of desire
Contributed by
mercedes
on
Tuesday, 30th December 2003 @ 04:01:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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This needs a lot of work but thought i would post it anyway
Soft music playing in the background
Low lights dance upon her skin
Gently swaying to the beat
Eyes closed, lips slightly parted
A soft moaning can be heard
As the rhythm touches her soul
Her hands glide down her body
In a soft silky caress
Her body responds to her touch
A slight flush reddens her cheeks
Her breath comes faster with the beat
In a trance so very deep
Sweat glistens upon her naked skin
Her legs quiver with every step she takes
Her breasts sway in tune to her need
Her hands explore every inch
Nipples once so soft and supple
Now are hard and well defined
Fingers trace the gentle swell
As their weight rests in her hands
Her fingers glide upon her lips
Her tongue keeps them nice and wet
Her eyes still closed to the world around her
Her body dancing to her desire
Her skin glistens, her moans echo
The music is what keeps her alive
Her body twists and turns
Her hands glide up and down
May this dance never end
Wish this feeling lasts forever
No cares, no worries
Her lust is all that matters
Copyright ©
mercedes
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2003-12-30 16:01:58]
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Re: Re: Dance of desire
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Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 12:06:38 PM AEST
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Ahem....I ahhh...ahem...I dont thinks words can express the sensuality of this write. The mental images it gives will leave me in pain for days. ;o) I feel like a voyeur watching from a dark window. Enticing, exciting, and VERY well done. more MORE!!
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Re: Re: Dance of desire
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Saturday, 3rd January 2004 @ 01:28:14 AM AEST
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| Quite nice:). |
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Re: Re: Dance of desire
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Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 10:48:10 AM AEST
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| Where does it need work? It's very good I love it. Is she doing a lap dance? Or is she topless dancing? Or neither of them, then whoops it just seems to be something erotic no pun intended. I like how the words dance with her slow and intense. It's definetely a mental masturbation very well done I'm intrigued by your work. |
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