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Not in your state of mind
Contributed by
Demon_of_Blood
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:20:54 AM in AEST
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-I'm tired of all your broken promises.
-Makes me want you to fucking die.
-giving me all your drunken excuses.
-All you are is a fucking lie.
--BUT YOU'RE JUST A DRUNKEN MAN, IN YOUR FUCKED UP STATE OF MIND.
--YOU ARE NOTHING THAT I AM, CAUSE YOU DISAPPOINT ME WITH EACH BIND.
--YOU'RE SUPPOSED TO BE MY FATHER, BUT YOU CAN'T SEE THAT ANY LONGER.
-Your bullshit is driving me insane.
-You throw me into a state of constant disdain.
-But if you died I won't complain.
-Because you're killing yourself and I won't absorb the pain.
--CAUSE YOU'RE A FUCKING DISAPPOINTMENT!
--I ATE THE LIES YOU FED ME NOW I CAN SEE THAT YOU MISLED ME!
--YOU'RE NOT ALWAYS RIGHT, BUT YOU ALWAYS LOOK FOR A FIGHT.
--NOONE CAN CONVINCE YOU THAT YOU'RE KILLING ME, BECAUSE THAT IDEA IS BEYOND YOUR SIGHT.
(goddamn you dad, goddamn you and your filthy fucking habits. Why can't you just put the bottle down? Why can't you just see past your pride? If it weren't for her then i'd be gone by now. Consider her your lucky chain.)
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Re: Re: Not in your state of mind
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Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 06:13:59 PM AEST
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| wow. coming from a dysfunctional family myself, that makes me shiver and hurts my stomach. ow. very real. makes me want to cry. hugs to you from a very empathetic peer. |
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Re: Re: Not in your state of mind
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Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 11:41:08 PM AEST
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This is a very distressing poem. I despise your dad now. I know one day he will regret everything. I wish he would realize now what his doing to himself, his decaying little by little. I just want to let you know that I Fuc king Love You I really do. And I am always here for you.
Love With Blood & Fire always LuCy |
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Re: Re: Not in your state of mind
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Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 09:26:47 AM AEST
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| man im sorry, i wanted to vote 5 ****** put cos im very stones + stupid i press 1 by mistake, your poems ace, alright? ; ( very sad.... my dad i dont think is as bad, but i hav sum idea.... |
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