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Timeless Love
Contributed by
ilhar
on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:17:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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As his hands softly caressed the hills and valleys of her body
Her mind traveled back to another place and time
Where her knight in shining armor took her
On the back of his white steed
As his lips found every curve of her being
She envisioned her lover in his rebel uniform
Stealing a moment away before going off to war
In a hayloft in the barn they consummated their love
As he entered her with strong strokes
She dreamed of the gangster as they ran from the law
In the backseat of the get away car
They took the time to join together in erotic pleasure
As the fire in them rose to a climatic eruption
She was glad that they were here in this place and time
For it seems their love has proven to be
Timeless
Copyright ©
ilhar
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2003-11-29 02:17:35]
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Re: Re: Timeless Love
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Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 06:04:12 AM AEST
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Wow...Shari...your mind sure does travel at unusual times..lol....J/K...:>)
This was lovely..thanks for sharing ..
I look forward to more like this...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Re: Timeless Love
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Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 11:18:44 PM AEST
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Yummeh!!!
This is a pleasure for the senses.Must have been fun writing it.
Very Yummeh lol
CS |
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Re: Re: Timeless Love
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Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 03:13:47 PM AEST
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| i love the traveling through time aspect, beautiful dreamy sensual lines here, 'tis great how you are so fluent in your various styles, am looking forward to more:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Re: Timeless Love
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Friday, 26th December 2003 @ 07:40:53 PM AEST
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yummy!!! Very beautiful, tasteful and softly erotic.
well done Shari! |
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