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This...Our Dance
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
on
Saturday, 15th November 2003 @ 04:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
eroticpoetry
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Wet wanton lips explore and dance,soft tongues touch in liquid depths
Then across my skin,enhancing...
The sighing of my breath
Trailing skin so smooth,with searching fingertips
Look deep into my half closed eyes
Tease my senses with your kiss
I feel you move within my touch,sweet arousal beckons play
Passion,desire,heated rush
As into you,I stray
Hair cascades to brush you,down it falls below my breasts
Skin on skin,a sensual connection
Friendship of the flesh
Flowing to you as a river,the calm before the storm
Trickling drops of sweet nectar
From my well of love so warm
Dance your arousal a lil deeper,thrust up into this song
Fill me with your creamy flow
As you watch me dance along
Copyright ©
lovingwhispers
... [
2003-11-15 16:34:18]
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Re: Re: This...Our Dance
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Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 12:21:50 PM AEST
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oh wow...and oh yeah ;o) Was writes like this that got us into this mess in the first place..lmao so knock it off will ya !!
this was so very...you :o)
Beautiful..
Roses |
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Re: Re: This...Our Dance
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Wednesday, 19th November 2003 @ 12:23:34 PM AEST
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| that was supposed to be 5 vote...but my hands were shaking so bad I messed up lmao |
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Re: Re: This...Our Dance
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 04:20:19 AM AEST
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| I cast it for 5....venkat |
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Re: Re: This...Our Dance
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Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 08:25:31 PM AEST
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| See now I have to go out and find some random girl this weekend... Bah! I loved it though. You are naughty you where right lol. |
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Re: Re: This...Our Dance
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Sunday, 7th December 2003 @ 03:41:39 PM AEST
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| That was very nicely done, leaves the mind spinning afterwards |
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Average Score: 11
Votes: 3
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