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Pop Rivit
Contributed by
jamesstockdale
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Saturday, 1st April 2017 @ 09:13:09 AM in AEST
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Tributes
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His name is Pop Rivit
Just another zero digit
Who thinks he is it
Never a kind word to be heard
His posts border on absurd
A man who lives to deliver the cheap shot
Most likely to hide what he ain`t got
Boasts of his health
Cause he has no wealth
Boisterous with his esteem
There only to shatter someone else`s dream
A loser of sorts
Your posts he distorts
Victorious in the end
Is his goal
Just another dead beat internet troll
Best to be forgotten
Unless you like to sample
All that is rotten
Copyright ©
jamesstockdale
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2017-04-01 09:13:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Re: Pop Rivit
(User Rating: 1 ) by on
Tuesday, 31st October 2017 @ 09:40:45 PM AEST (User
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ALL RIGHT James..as in..good for you.
There is a time to rein in patience and slather the truth all over.
So far outside of your gentlemanly grace and restraint that I checked to see if it was you!
You prove the point, sir. Still waters run deep.
You are a man of many thoughts!
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Re: Re: Pop Rivit
(User Rating: 1 ) by on
Thursday, 4th October 2018 @ 09:08:44 AM AEST (User
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I like this. Very clever is the rhyme scheme and the flow is great. Plus, it/'/s so so much speaks the truth!!!
"Just another dead beat internet troll
Best to be forgotten" ⬅ Indeed! |
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Re: Re: Pop Rivit
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Wednesday, 6th February 2019 @ 05:21:05 AM AEST (User
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lol this is great
T_T
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