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Heartsick
Contributed by
disconnectedchild
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Saturday, 28th August 2010 @ 05:57:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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It has been days since you have passed on.
I don't know how to go along since you've been gone_
I have become quiet and withdrawn.
Time moves on,
Seasons come and go_.
Your memories fill my soul with sorrow.
There is only one thing I wish I could let you know...
Is how much I miss you.
I guess I keep wishing for a mystical breakthrough_
I never though I would feel this way in my heart,
Since you left I have been torn apart.
I wish I would have given you everything from the start_
But alas the time has come for us to depart.
Copyright ©
disconnectedchild
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2010-08-28 17:57:41]
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Re: Re:
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Thursday, 29th September 2011 @ 04:53:37 PM AEST
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| not very original, but i liked how it flowed and how pessimistic it was |
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Re: Re: [sic]
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Monday, 12th March 2012 @ 06:49:38 PM AEST
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| "I never thoughT I would feel this way in my heart," |
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Re: very well
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Thursday, 5th April 2012 @ 05:20:45 PM AEST
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my condolences for your loss very good write thank you for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: Re: Heartfelt
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Monday, 31st December 2012 @ 11:29:16 PM AEST
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I waited to endure this and then sadly I have. I understand it truly. Moments some moments there one never lives long enough to get past.
It's the way of this life you know. You've said it truly when you know.
Peace! |
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Re: Re: Heartsick
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Thursday, 13th August 2015 @ 08:58:17 AM AEST
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This hits home for me right now, and I completely share in your pain. I think you did a great job portraying your feelings and pain.
Great write, thanks for sharing |
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