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Life Will Go On
Contributed by
daprdan
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Wednesday, 17th May 2006 @ 12:28:12 AM in AEST
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Dedicated
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When we were young our lives were new,
Our shared romance and dreams they grew,
Till that fateful day did come,
And finally the song was sung,
But, Life Went On
It hurt and tore deep down inside,
The tempest of that terrible ride,
Yet slowly diligently I rose above,
For life must rise as did my love,
And, Life Went On
I'd lived and loved and hoped and cried,
To mend my soul but no reply,
To quench a fire and dream I'd held,
Of love and life that didn't meld,
Yet Still, Life Went On
Life's monotony did well,
Pain and feelings they were quelled,
Through it all I was not forsaken,
Another's hand for me was taken,
And Too, Life Went On
I saw a life a form of rebirth,
We brought 5 souls unto this Earth,
They are my pride and their mothers,
But now I find there is another,
Oh Yes, Life Went On
It's not over this life I lead,
There's so much left it's only seed,
My life could grow and yours can too,
Say yes to me we've much to do
And As Always, Life Will Go On.
Copyright ©
daprdan
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2006-05-17 00:28:12]
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Re: Re: Life Will Go On
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Tuesday, 6th June 2006 @ 04:36:09 AM AEST
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Great rhyme and meter, a truly honest write. Yes, life goes on.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Re: Life Will Go On
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Monday, 10th May 2010 @ 11:10:36 PM AEST
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Life will go on true that.
great poem |
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Re: Re: Life goes on
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Friday, 21st October 2011 @ 06:13:56 AM AEST
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Great Poem.Great Lyrics and Rhyme.
Yes life goes on, no matter what. It's how we handle life that counts.
See my Poem; "How a Day Changes'
Thank you for your write. |
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