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Unforgiven
Contributed by
neptunes_first
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:21:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I want to fade
like the gleaming attractions
of compact discs and shiny
holograms.
I want to be forgotten
in the lust of progress,
sated by these plugs and
sockets.
I want to become lost,
in skips with tangled, wet wires.
thinking about how useful
I once was.
Instead, I am still here,
with you and my
switches.
Copyright ©
neptunes_first
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2005-03-10 08:21:13]
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Re: Re: Unforgiven
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 10:00:19 AM AEST
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Was this written for me? cause if it is then i think i love you LOL.
This has to be one of my favorites of yours...
Jane |
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Re: Re: Unforgiven
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Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 12:27:30 PM AEST
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Oh gosh, Nep. This is too sad.
It says a whole lot more than it actually... well.. says.. if you get me.
I wish there was something I could do to help.
Good write my friend,
I hope you feel better soon.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Re: Unforgiven
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Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 02:03:21 PM AEST
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very sad Nep
Michelle |
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Re: Re: Unforgiven
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Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 10:50:48 PM AEST
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This is moving, and its simplicity makes it more so. It's not a spectacle, not at all; presented in almost an aside fashion, yet, full. I like very much what this says, and still more what it doesn't say.
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Re: Re: Unforgiven
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Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 11:26:42 PM AEST
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| You have done a good job on this. I can apply this to some relationships i have had. Alas all i can do is fade from theie memory I hope. |
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Re: Re: Unforgiven
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Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 07:19:20 AM AEST
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A well written indeed. With all the beauty in the poem, I'd have to say that my favorite line is the first one. I want to fade... I've felt those words through my heart too many times.
Take care.
David |
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Average Score: 34
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