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Factory Flower
Contributed by
neptunes_first
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 08:11:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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I happen upon a bomb shelter,
only it seems that the bomb has already
detonated.
Factories of corrigated people,
once productive,
lie crushed one upon another,
for heat, or discomforture - I know not.
Only I know how they work this floor,
wet and cold, in fatigue.
A stick in a barrel blooms
into a solitary orange flower,
its petals licking at the depths
of my adventurous soul . . .
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2005-03-10 08:11:59]
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Re: Re: Factory Flower
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Thursday, 10th March 2005 @ 09:53:35 AM AEST
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A very disturbing poem, im not sure i get it although i may be wrong. Hmm...
* Thinks *
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