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Blood Drenched Roses
Contributed by
Baburu
on
Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:58:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Dark
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Blood drenched roses just for M’Lady
An expression of our dark love
Grown in my personal abbey
Drenched in my own blood
Such an expression cannot be measured
In the ways of mortal man
For her love I have hungered
From London to Cheyenne
There is no one else who is like her
And no other flower such as this
An ominous gesture for my lover
Let us live forever in dark bliss
Copyright ©
Baburu
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2004-12-09 22:58:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Re: Blood Drenched Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 09:00:07 PM AEST (User
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I love this Orphy..I don't know why exactly; but I do. |
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Re: Re: Blood Drenched Roses
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Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 01:39:18 PM AEST (User
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dark and chilling yet touched with a hint of romance I love it
Michelle |
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Re: Re: Blood Drenched Roses
(User Rating: 1 ) by on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 10:35:54 PM AEST (User
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well what brought me to this poem was the title and the category. i would say your ending was the best of this piece. the rhymes werent forced, and i like how the poem doesnt focus on the format, but on the concept. |
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Average Score: 18 Votes: 5
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