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In the Moonlight
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 08:44:45 PM in AEST
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Moon! Why do you taunt me so
Saying those things to me, teasing me
Restless you leave me
Now, sleepless, hopeless I will be
Desperate ever more, wanting more
Troubled so by thee
Wait, it would seem all I can do
I lay still, counting down until
Sun comes back to me
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Silent-No-More
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2004-06-11 20:44:45]
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Re: Re: In the Moonlight
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Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 05:28:35 AM AEST
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Very intriguing and thoughtful write!
I like it. |
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Re: Re: In the Moonlight
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:30:43 AM AEST
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Re: In the Moonlight
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Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:51:20 PM AEST
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| very short and sweet. Sometimes it *does* seem like the moon is out there teasing all the romantic hearts - specially when it's full. |
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Re: Re: In the Moonlight
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Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:19:40 AM AEST
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| Nice write, the moon does funny things to people, makes romance bloom in the night. Good write |
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Re: Re: In the Moonlight
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Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 05:59:15 PM AEST
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Because daydreams are simply wistful fancy, yet they that visit in the night ... have substance. The moon ushers them in and then sees them out. Such is its nature.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Re: In the Moonlight
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Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:04:23 AM AEST
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reminds me of and old song.."In the misty moonlight"
I don't know why.. |
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