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You are grounded
Contributed by
pope234
on
Tuesday, 27th May 2025 @ 10:26:18 AM in AEST
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You are grounded
Here on holy ground
The leaves of the trees
Are floating in the water
Because there are trees
Near the lake that my Father
Made with his holy hands
Many years ago
And also the birds are now resting on the trees
Branch
I spend the morning here on the lake
First thing in the morning
And there are nobody else
At this time of the day
Also it it still very cold near the lake
I brought with me my spring jacket
I know I will be just fine
It will warm up by lunch time
And there will be crowded
I personally hate crowds
It is now 8:30 PM
I will return back home
Also I will do some work for my Father
Using my computer
I will write some poems for my father
My poems will be all different from each other
Also have different feelings
That comes out straight from my heart
Also people I am loving and caring people
Copyright ©
pope234
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2025-05-27 10:26:18]
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Re: You are grounded
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by irisblue on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 10:09:36 PM AEST
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| this poem is awesome it flows well and pulled me along for the ride. and the ending is soo funny I didn't see that coming. love it |
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Re: You are grounded
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 11:09:37 PM AEST
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ha! this is great! beautiful first post, i look forward to your
next, warm welcome to ypdc:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: You are grounded
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 11:22:33 PM AEST
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That's funny and didn't expect that at all. Thank you for posting and  to YPDC.
Tim |
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Re: You are grounded
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by shanat on
Wednesday, 11th March 2015 @ 11:41:43 PM AEST
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Yeah I agree with the other comments, I didn't see the ending comming, what a ride! Flowed perfectly :)
Shanat :)
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Re: You are grounded
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 04:43:10 PM AEST
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Great piece! Hope the horse is okay :P
-Ambivalence |
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Re: You are grounded
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by xHeathenx on
Thursday, 12th March 2015 @ 05:31:48 PM AEST
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| A great poem with a remarkable joke in it's writing. I rather enjoyed it. Hope to see more, comedy or not. :) |
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Re: You are grounded
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by Banjosandwitch on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 09:10:00 AM AEST
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| lol giggles |
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Re: You are grounded
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th March 2015 @ 03:10:32 PM AEST
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Hahaha.. A poet after my own heart!! I was caught by the ending also...
Welcome to YPDC... |
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