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Between My Words And Your Answer
A pregnant pause after my statement
so much silence filled the space.
All I said was that I love you ...
no emotions crossed your face.
Not so much as a stutter
my words were just ignored.
Not anger or excitement
you just looked a little bored.
We held hands as we were walking
then all conversation stopped.
I held roses that you gave me ...
I saw your face, the roses dropped.
Sometimes roses have a meaning
this time that meaning made me cry.
The pregnant pause was just you wondering
how you would say goodbye.
Once the words were uttered
there was a brief sigh of relief.
Your sigh I/'/m sure an accident
I was in shock and disbelief.
We had been walking near the ocean
with your red roses in my hand.
Now I watched as foamy tide came in
and covered them with sand.
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