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Black and Red
I was beaten black and red
Until I wished that I were dead
I was bleeding from my eyes
I made my peace, saying my goodbyes
I lay crumpled on the floor
My arms sagging, my heart torn
My breathing ragged, so alone
I couldn/'/t get up, I could not go
I bullet hole in my chest
I said my peace lay me to rest
My breath is gone, I could not go
I/'/m left here, all alone
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