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Syria's call
Feel the anger and the pain,
confusion hits me too.
Got a broken heart and mind,
wondering who will mend the fence.
Feel the anger and the pain,
confusion hits me too.
i am feeling lone and hurt,
who will mend my heart and mind?
Feel the anger and the pain,
confusion hits me too.
life has fallen apart,
do we have a heart?
Feel the anger and the pain,
confusion hits me too.
How can things can get so bad,
who can stop it now?
Feel the anger and the pain,
confusion hits me to.
who will mend the fence,
the broken-hearted world?
Listen to my spark of hope,
the ray of light pouring in,
trough the crack in everything,
let the heart sing,
a tribute to the world.
We/'/ve been hit,
with everything,
as hard as it can be.
Still life goes on,
will we turn the page?
Let the hope begin,
to open up our hearts,
and minds and souls,
what////'////s the goal of life itself,
do ask that question now!
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